Today’s post adds a section for my Sunday Scribblings post; the second in the series of weekly posts until I am done with the Cybils reading: Cybils Awards Roundup Two for Nonfiction Reads.
Poetic Sundays
The Clarity Pyramid
Invented poetry forms again; and while this is also courtesy ShadowPoetry, I had talked about this form years ago on my blog. But not as part of Poetic Sundays, so here it is again!
What is the Clarity Pyramid?
It is a poetry form created by Jerry P. Quinn, and consists of two triplets followed by a single line (7 lines in all). Usually, this poem is center aligned when displayed. Each line is syllabic with an increasing number of syllables from 1 to 8 (skipping 4). The poem itself is thematic too – centered around an idea represented by the poem’s title which is also its first single syllable line.
The Clarity Pyramid’s Characteristics
So here are this form’s key elements:
- syllabic: 1,2,3 – 5,6,7 – 8
- thematic and structural: all lines revolve around a central word – the title of the poem (the first line of the poem) – see below for details for each line. Center aligned when displayed.
First triplet:
Title (one syllable word displayed in all capitals)
Two syllable line (synonym/definition of title)
Three syllable line (synonym/definition of title)
Second triplet: This describes a life event centered around or one which provides a poetic view or outlook on the first line/title. The syllabic count is as below:
5 syllable line
6 syllable line
7 syllable line
The last line is 8 syllables, and is in quotations as this line contains a quote that defines the first word/title.
My Example
I decided to reuse one of the poems from that original post (you can check out the other one I attempted as well in that post).
KIDS
Children
Son, daughter
First smiles, words, walks, they
enthrall, make memories,
hold your heart in their palms.
“teach us what life is all about.”
– Vidya Tiru (@ LadyInReadWrites)
Recently
On the Home Front
We celebrated Deepavali, the festival of lights this weekend. And it was certainly lowkey this year without the usual gatherings of friends and families. In an effort to include at least a few of our close friends and family who live in the neighborhood, we packaged and dropped off homemade snacks and sweets at their homes.
It reminded me of when I was all of 10 (and a few years around that age as well) when I took platters filled with goodies my mom made to the homes of many friends in our little town, one at a time. The aunty of each home would ask me to take a seat while she replaced the items on the platter with the sweet and savory preparations made for the festival at their home; and of course, I can’t be kept waiting without doing anything so I was given a small plate of goodies to snack on while this replacement was going on! Definitely a job I relished(pun intended) doing for my mom, and glad my brother never wanted to do it (I guess he did not realize he was missing out on deliciousness!).
My Blog Posts
From my last Sunday Scribblings
- Inspired Book Pairing of Great Nonfiction and Fiction
- Balderdash: A Wonderful Word and A Delightful Book
- 6 More Powerful Women To Read About
- Sunday Scribblings #50: A Collective Whoop of Victory
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The Others
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On My Blog and Home-front
College applications continue; reading and reading for the Cybils continues!
This Week’s Celebrations
For this week, here are a few I might enjoy celebrating…
- International Observances: November 16th is the International Day for Tolerance; the 20th is Universal Children’s Day; the 21st is World Hello Day (simply say hello!); and the third Thursday of November is World Philosophy Day
- Food! The 16th is National Fast Food Day; the 17th is National Baklava Day and National Homemade Bread Day; the 20th is National Peanut Butter Fudge Day; and the 21st is National Gingerbread Cookie Day!
- Other: With the 16th and 17th being what they are, no wonder the 17th is also National Take A Hike Day! And then stay indoors (or take it to the backyard if the weather permits) on the 21st for National Play Monopoly Day. And if you need something else, then you have National Absurdity Day on the 20th of November for all those something elses you can conjure!!
- Week-long observances: it is book awards time everywhere!! It is National Book Awards Week… And it is also American Education Week, so more to do with literacy this week… 🙂
Cybils Awards Roundup Two
The list of books reviewed on my blog since my last (or rather, first) roundup post. Not too many reviewed though I have read many more…
- The Voice that Won the Vote: How One Woman’s Words Made History
- The Power of Her Pen: The Story of Groundbreaking Journalist Ethel L. Payne
- Thanks to Frances Perkins: Fighter for Workers’ Rights
- Ruth Objects: The Life of Ruth Bader Ginsburg
- Elizabeth Warren’s Big, Bold Plans
- Kamala Harris: Rooted in Justice
- We Had to Be Brave: Escaping the Nazis on the Kindertransport (this one is still a read in progress, and this link points to a #Nonficnov post about book pairings)
Wrapping up my Sunday Scribblings
So dear reader, this was it for my Sunday Scribblings and the Cybils Awards Roundup Two. I would love to hear your comments on my post(s), poetic Sunday section, and anything else. And which of these days do you plan to celebrate (or any other)? Also, I do look forward to reading your poems (hoping you have attempted one or the other forms so far?!)
Linking this to the Sunday Post over at the Caffeinated Reviewer and the Sunday Salon
I love how you post here on your blog as well as on Instagram. I wish I knew a way to crosspost my blog posts onto Instagram. I’ve neglected it.
Your Cybils reading is coming along well. I enjoyed my time on the nonfiction panel. I thought about moving to it this year and letting someone else do picture books.
What a lovely time it is during the festival of lights. I had no idea that families offered snacks.
while the way people share their festive treats might differ from place to place, this festival is an epicurean delight in every way!!
and as for my Cybils reading, since we are reading everything from elementary to high school nonfiction, I am constantly trying to read multiple books (not the best idea maybe, but makes me feel like i will get to the finish line sooner!!)
I love your story and all the treats. They look yummy. Have a great week!
thanks Aj
I always learn something when I visit your blog, I have no recollection of ever learning about a clarity pyramid. For shame, I should demand a rebate on the fees for my education!
thanks DJ and lol!! even with that pyramid, i am not sure i see things with clarity !!!.
I love the update and I am very excited to visit your blog today as I finally responded to your nomination… The link is attached to my name on this comment. ☀️
thank you so much Kate for doing it!! and your answers were so delightful
The treats look yum. I cam imagine how much fun had delivering the platter of goodies.
yes, indeed!! it was my favorite part of the festivities!!
I used to be such a big poetry writer. However, I was never savvy on all the technical types of poetry. Always love reading your blog and learning a new one every time!
thank you so much Bri.. means so much
Very informative post. I am not knowledgeable about poetry but it was nice to learn something new here today. Thank you
thanks Ana.. glad you enjoyed it
I love poetry. Such an expressive art.
thanks Ashley
I learn so much about writing from your blog! More than I ever thought possible. I love how you put everything in an easy to understand for the beginner kind of way.
thanks so much Alyssa, it feels wonderful to read such comments as I do hope that is what readers get from reading my posts..
Loved the poetry section of this post. I haven’t written any in years. Got me thinking maybe I should start again.
Celebrations this year are hard but glad to hear you still managed to enjoy yours even if it was low key.
Oh I wish I was artistic enough to write poetry. I’ve always been intrigued by it, but it’s one subject I’ll just enjoy to read/listen to instead of being a creator. Such a great post 💕
thanks so much.. glad you enjoyed it
thanks Jo.. And reading your comment reminds me to get back to your blog audit challenge soon
Thank for sharing. I’m unfortunately no good with poetry. I wish I could love it but I can’t, a bit like art. I just think I don’t have a creative side.
i am sure you do, based on the reviews you write!!
I used to write poetry all the time. I always had a dream of publishing a book of my own poetry.
that is wonderful.. i keep thinking of similar things too.. so thanks for the inspiration and i look forward to your book too
You remind me what Ms. Kessler taught me a Heinz count of years ago. Poems don’t have to rhyme- they have to have meter and structure.
thanks Roy!! that is high compliment indeed
Sounds like a lovely celebration. I am not as familiar with this holiday as I am some others.
we do have many celebrations through the year.. and this is one celebrated throughout iIndia
Looks like your keeping busy with the Cybils awards! I dabble in poems but didn’t know there are so many different kinds.
Martha.. your poems are always so beautiful!
This is such a nice post, I have doing poetry since childhood. So excited to explore more poetry by your side.
thank you Puja
Thanks for sharing this! Such a great read!
thanks Kimmy
Your Festival of Lights celebrations looks lovely. I enjoy your poem chat and love your poem.
thank you!